Teacher Crit.

After printing off my poster, and showing it to my teacher, i got some critique and therefore made some changes to my poster. There was clearly some vital things my poster was missing and some very obvious technique it was lacking.

 The first change i made was to the Yamaha writing on the top left block. (well actually i changed all of them to capitals). Then (top left) i added a white drop shadow to this, like the original has.



Then the most obvious change i made, was to the two bottom Yamaha writings. I changed the colour of the blocks surrounding them, to a pale red; like the originals.



Then my teacher noticed that there was something not right with the actual character. It was lacking a sort of poster effect, rather than it just simply being cut out an image and stuck into another. Here are the techniques i used to make it alot more effective and more like the original. First i had to check out the different sort of filter effects, and blow me down, there was a posters edges effect. Then to finish it off, i played around with the colour and contrast adjustments.

This was my end result.... (By the way, which i am very
very VERY HAPPY WITH)















My last adjustments to the poster, was simply just adding in the black outlines of the colour blocks and the thick black lines seperating the squares (shown in the two pictures surrounding this text).