Overall, i am generally happy with my Crit i got in class today. I feel like my Animations were a sucess, and the class found them pleasing to watch. However, some critisms consisted of:
Trial bike: The sound of the bike, did not go with the actions being produced by the bike. Right at the end, when the bike goes down the hil, a different sound to the bike should be created.
Gym: Good, but the one thing pointed out was the cut from the rower to the treadmill is very vibrant which is good, however the cuts from treadmills to weights and the weights to the end, are different and not as vibrant and quick.
Diving Boards: Generally the best one, very funny, however things to be added such as the music ending is not good. It stops with the music starting to kick in. I could have had the water cover all tge page and i could have used a pin/puppet tool for the wave.
This is my Diving Boards Animation:
This is my Gym Animation:
This is my Animation for my Trials Bike:
